Angel of Death

Hey there! Well, first off, I didn't read this but I skimmed through this and I can see the problems. First, if you're going to use a rhyme scheme keep ...

Yay! You've posting something new and it was lovely! Everyone already got to the grammatical errors and such, so I'm only here to lend compliments. This was really unique and ...

Hello! So since you reviewed something of mine, I thought I'd take a look at this. So I liked the idea and I felt that it was really creative but ...

Hello there! So, altogether, this poem is really good but if you rip this apart into many stanzas, it's not so good. I think this is bland and the message ...

Hey Ash! I'm so sorry for taking so long to get to this. But since all of the grammatical stuff is taken care of, I'll just say that I liked ...

Hey there Jiggy! Wow, so this was written well for a first draft. You made it seem like it was beyond horrible but nothing you write is, so I don't ...

Hey Clo! Wow, it seems I haven't read anything of yours in a long long time. But I liked this though I think it just needs a little bit more ...

Hey Merry! Time. It comes in different forms, shapes and sizes. We can't see it or feel it. Instead, imagine it pass through our fingers as we grow up. It's ...

Hello Untitled, Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death, but please, call me Angel. Okay, I am sure that this is not the right place for this to be. This ...

Hey there Otzmatron! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death but please, call me Angel. Well anyways, before I give you a critique, I must say that you are very ...

Hey there Jiggy! I like this but I think Clo says it best. Ooh. Ooh. This had such a fuzzy feeling of nostalgia about it. You know, ever since you've ...

Hey there! I'm Angel and I shall be your reviewer today. To tell you the truth, this is really jumbled or not all together. You have two stanzas that don't ...

Hey there! Wow, this was really funny! I like playing the game but it sucks that they don't speak English or any real languages for that matter and then they ...

Hello there! I usually don't read fantasy but your Prologue was very promising. It seemed realistic, and that's one quality I like when I read a story, no matter what ...

Hello Ash, This was really good and I only found one nit-pick other than the ones KJ pointed out. She was going to better her life, if not for but ...